Salvation...
Posted in alone, despair, memories, pain, silhouette 32 comments
I wish the pain would subside
or i could just let it out...
I wanna figure a way
To calm my soul
Or else i could
Just watch it wither away...
These wounds may heal,
But why don’t
the scars fade...
Staying and reminding
Of the moments
“I forgot”, i say...
I bury my pride
And let that tear ride
Take me home
Take me, where i belong...
Blood, oozes out,
Then why i couldn’t feel the blade?
- Eon Heath
(image: Google)
32 comments:
The blues are back again? Yr you triggered my blue attacks with these sad lines..
How can you expect 'no questions' hain? Later.. But aren't let off yet ;)
i'll be back again for usual.. Abhi gotta run!
@Deepika
:) kuch nahi re...ainvi...
seems personal. u depict a heart full of deep pain in ur lines. so be happy. you will have to just look outside and you will find numerous reasons to make ur smile wider.
@Some Unspoken Words
The hardest part is smiling through the pain,for the pain ahs long over stayed...but then, sometimes, the pain is your only reason for survival and becomes your reason for the smile...
:) it is personal.
hey desert n being alone has brought back the blue sad side of urs...y??...these lines r stabbin u know...very strong...well agreed sometimes pain is the reason u put up a smile..but just let tat smile rule n dilute the pain...let the wound heal...:)...
@Vaisakhi
i guess the desert man is yet to get accustomed... :) like i said, the wounds may heal...the scars stay as memories of those times...its not the wound that hurts, its these scars...
:)
When the mind was numbed with the painful memories of the past, how could the blade be felt? It wasn't.
Regards,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Blasphemous Aesthete
true. precise.
:)
the second para is impacting and surprisingly true..the wounds may heal but at times scars rip them fresh and painful again! liked that thought...the mental pain is soo sharp at times that no blade can be comparable...
sarah
@Sarah
The feeling makes the words flow and thoughts happen tojust shape those words to a more presentable form....
:) thanks...
This calls for a great deal of subtleness..the last line would leave a person puzzled or smiling...
Wonderfully stated the salvation..The pain does subsides but momentarily because it is the way life wants to make us and make us stand where we stand today..
@Alcina
True, the past is what makes us what we are, it is for us to learn from...
Thanks..
:)
thoughtful
nice poem
@sm
Thnaks... :)
♥Love your blog♥
The scars won't fade, will be forever. It will definitely remind you of your memories, but I hope you get the strength to live with them, but never run away!
Yes, let the tear ride...
@Mary ♥ Mur
Thanks...
@Poonam.doc
:P
The scars, ironically give the strength to carry on...a reminder of the beautiful past...the tears do ride, but would soon dry up...
:) thanks doc...
Cherish the beautiful past :)
@Poonam
:) Amen.
@Eon
Mention not..was my pleasure to let you know :)
@Alcina
An appreciation. :)
Oops!...Sry...missed your poems...:(
Really loved the second para...Lovely comparison!!
@Valli
its ok re...u read it thats enough.. :) n am glad yo uliked it..thanks...
:D
Hmmm! I am wondering why the harsh conclusion to a reasonably decent flow of emotions bottled up till date. But I guess the harshness in the conclusion is outwards, the inward harshness can be completely overlooked if one gets carried away by the final lines. Nice work man. A neat balance of inward and outward feelings. Correct me if I am wrong! I might have lost a little charm given the hiatus. ;-)
@VP
buddy, today i go to bed in peace. For your comment has calmed a part of that turmoiled mind. Even with the prolonged absence, you wouldnt comment without reasoning it with yourself, of that am sure.
The harshness from teh outside and the tear showing what is inside...in the end, its a choice between submission and endurance...
:)
They are the best faces, they are the worse faces
behind the pretty smile lies painful traces ... keep walking!!!!
It is so stunning that the pain that is so real now, will be such a grey memory later.
Sorry for the extra late comment...was so lazy to login into blogger :D
Why so blue all of a sudden..??.. Some things just remain and haunt us for the rest of our lives...so much that we becoming numb to them and also the emotions !
Guess sometimes time even can't heal the pain.
Take Care.
@Anorak
hey, thanks buddy...behind pretty smile, lies painful traces...so true...
thanks again..
:)
@The Wandering Minstrel
a grey memory that some other day would still turn crimson in the moon...
@Fatima
no issues gal...laziness had been resting inme since time immortal...so i do know...
:)
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