A Song...
Posted in alone, love, pain, silhouette, song 34 comments
Ok friends, about this post, well i tried my hand at writing a song this time...and the reason behind it is, there is this one song Someday By John Legend from August Rush which i just happen to love...and i listen to it n no of times in a day. So the last time when i was listening to it, i had these words forming in me...
The dreams we saw,
N promises made,
Were for us,
To live together...
Now am left alone,
I don’t know how it happened,
Just moments before,
You, were here...
The words were true,
Now am left alone...
But i still remember
The sweet scent of your touch
And i can never forget
The taste of your lips, on mine...
So i choose to walk alone...
Be alone and finish wats left undone...
To keep our worlds together,
Be together..
With you forever....
When you read these lines, i just want you all to keep that tune playing in your mind....thanks...
dedicated, as always,
to you love....
The dreams we saw,
N promises made,
Were for us,
To live together...
Now am left alone,
I don’t know how it happened,
Just moments before,
You, were here...
The words were true,
Now am left alone...
But i still remember
The sweet scent of your touch
And i can never forget
The taste of your lips, on mine...
So i choose to walk alone...
Be alone and finish wats left undone...
To keep our worlds together,
Be together..
With you forever....
When you read these lines, i just want you all to keep that tune playing in your mind....thanks...
dedicated, as always,
to you love....
34 comments:
Beautiful lines :)
It fits on the tune.. Well done uncle! Btw don't you think undone word feels odd in last paragraph?.. Pta nahi i felt so.. Ignore if its just me.. :) Else all was in perfect flow of words and emotions..
The promise were made but are they bound to be hailed on this earth only? If she was your's.. She is your's now too.. Doesn't matters here or not. :)
Lovely one that is...and the lyrics just fit perfectly in that tune :) :)
New experiment and a good one at it!
Cheers,
Aha!! That was cool. Indeed I played that tune in my mind as I read your lines. Fits the tune well, doesn it? brilliant!
Idea for Remix video???
thats a nice one :)
@Simran
Hey, thanks.. :)
@Deepika
Bachchi, hmmm, that undone fits into one tune in that song...and a few promises have to be fulfilled here.. :)
the rest we can do later..hehehe ;)
@Tanvi
Hey red riding hood, where were you?? long time...n thanks..hehe...upto new things...yup..
:P
@Happy Girl
remix!! well i better not do that, they sound so cheesy n wierd...i prefer the originality to it.. :P
n thanks.. :) i actually asked a friend to record it...hopefully he does it soon n i can put it up here...
@Some unspoken words
hey, thanks.. :)
Its...umm its beautiful the lyrics suited perfectly to the music...it was soothing you know !
I really have this 1000W smile on my face and its not always there :)
Some things are better left unsaid !!!!
Thank you for making me smile...thanks a lot !
Take Care.
@Fatima
Well reading your comment surely did give me a 10000W smile...hehehe..
thanks..
Offo!!...You are trying lyrics also...Good good...Your song is beautiful...
Next tym...You write your own song...and generate your own tune...:D
i cant tell u wat effect these words have on me ryt now....well i related it to a movie though:)....i always loved this track....n the words u gave to it is just amazin...:)....loved it so very much....:)))
@Valli
you see gal, an idle mind becomes a devils workshop, only thing, in my case the devil turns out to be a bit too romantic..hehehe
:P
@Vaisakhi
hehehe, thanks re...well, means a lot...
:D
that was simple, but also- elegant --- meshed out rather well with a tune i hummed deep in my mind! :)
lovely...
The lingering presence of someone dear is ever present here, in your writing.
Nice one.
@Matangi Mawley
heehe...thanks :D
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Glad that you could notice, for my writings are always for her...
:)
I have never heard the song you said..but then the lines you wrote were no doubt pretty nice.I'll hear the song once and again read up your write up to let the tune hit my ears :) ..
@Alcina
hey, i have linked the song on youtube in the songs name here on the post...you can listen to it...
:) hope it fits well...
Kya baat hai Eonji, very sweet and heartfelt, Straight from your heart as always.
& I need to Thank you for the song,the tune is continuously playing in my mind "we won't say another good-bye again" :)
Dedication to your someone special,beautiful :)
@Poonam.Doc
i just love the song, rings so true...and the way John Legend has lent his emotions to the words,as if he has given life to them...beautiful...
my words were always for her, will always be.. :) thanks..
beautiful words touched a part of me i didnt know existed and the song by Leagend is wonderful too..what a find! thanks a ton!
@Phoenix
So the gal with the colour pencils is back!!! thanx and welcome...
:P
I cant listen to the song right now, my speakers r not working :( but ur words are as soulful as melody, so i dont feel m missing in on something :) will definitely come back and read again once i have the song with me!
sarah
Beautiful .... Just as your inspiration !!!
Ritz...
www.delectableflavors.blogspot.com
@Sarah
hmm, sad... :( but do listen to the song later..its real beautiful...
and thanks.. :D
@Ritz..
well, thanks for your kind words, as for my inspiration, they hold true...
:)
Beautiful words... Loved them a lot...
Believe me, many people must have related themselves with your words.... including me....
Well, this is the best part about blog worlds... When you start off, you think you are the only one.. but late you realize, you can almost create another planet with like minded people around.. anyway, that was a different spin.. whole point is, i really like your words...
@I am Alive
And so, you did return after almost an eternity!!! and thanks..a lot...its nice to see those familiar faces back, something, someone you have had seen before, it keeps the hope alive...
thanks..
Its so beautiful.. Touched me deeply particularly the last stanza.. The memory of our loved one remains with us,bringing a smile to our lips.. strengthening us in our moments of weakness.. guiding us in darkness like a ray of light..
@Nikki
I dont know wat to say, but consider this. I thought about your long absence on thursday, n yest was my day off...today, the first thing in the morning i see, Your Comment!!! wow...thanks...
True, its always upto us to make those memories our strength or weakness...
:) thanks...
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