Dancing in the moonlight...
Posted in love, silhouette, wishes 24 comments
I wanna feel you tonight,
and just dance in this moonlight...
Kiss your lips,
hold you close,
just sing it to you,
any song that you chose...
Walk in the rain,
with my arms around your waist,
just love you baby,
coz' thats what i know best...
i still wanna feel you tonight,
and dance, even without the moonlight...
(image is googled)
24 comments:
Dancing on the tunes of love,
Showering of blessings from high above!
without moon or moonlight,
Holding the beloved one,
Makes the Moment Bright!!
"just love you baby,
coz' thats what i know best..." Beautiful lines Eon :)
I loved the googled image, I know it takes lot of time for the perfect one!
@Beyond Horizon (Poonam)
those lines are beautiful...n thanks... :) hehehe
abt the image, google was generous, it was the second image that showed!! lucky me...
that is a very cute and sweet expression of love written in the form of ur charming poem. so sweet. :)
cute n sweet....lovely rhyme..this could make an amazin song u know...i could kind of sing it while readin...:)....n google is gr8...lovely pic..:P
It was awesome Eon ! Beautiful..the lines just captured my heart..
"i still wanna feel you tonight,
and dance, even without the moonlight..."
and wow...you've got great luck man, such a cute pic :)
And hey even I agree with Vaisakhi somehow even I was reading it as if it were a song!
Take Care.
@Some unspoken words
the sweetness is in your comments...thanks..
:)
@Vaisakhi
A song is what i wanted it to be...thanks.. :) n yes, google is great...
@Fatima
Lady luck did bless me... ;)
thanks...
i still wanna feel you tonight,
and dance, even without the moonlight.
and I wish they live merrily ever after, once together in such a beautiful communion. :)
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Blasphemous Aesthete
The dance without a moonlight, was a subtle hint of her absence...
but still, they would live happily ever after...
It's got such a nice sing song tune to it. Trust me, I so want to give it some music. Your poems are that lyrical. Some day, Eon, some day.
@Meher
Sure gal..someday. n thanks, glad you liked it...
:P
u know what i was to ask u if super moon was affecting ur sense or not?... this one proved :P
that was good one and for a change not the sad cries of heart.
but a beautiful lyrical song with sweet happy touch :)
keep writing like this... and i'll comment..hehehe.. par thoda bhaav khana to banta hai.. ;)
@Deepika
Well well, the super moon is yet to affect me fully...this is jus the beginning... :P
sweetness, hmmm...now you know...
tu chahiye utna bhaav kha re...koi ni... ;)
woha!extremely romantic.beautiful :)
@Sunakshi
After a long time...welcome gal..
thanks..n glad you like dit..
:)
Nothing like poetry to express love isn't it? Wish I could write poems! It was lovely- simple! Hope the one you wrote it for likes it too.
Best
Meera
@Meera
She likes everything i write, and she knows it even before i write... :)
glad you liked it...n writing poems aint that hard...just relate t othat one emotion you feel, and pour out everything on the paper...jus express wat you feel..it comes out decent.. :D hehe
Regards,
The Silhouette...
hey! first of all the pic is loveelyyy...too good :) and ur write up, i m regretting that y didnt i read this at night time, would have dozed off with nice dreams :( ;) its sooo mushy and romantic..good one and first time its something from ur end that gave me an optimistic feel. keep smiling :D
sarah
@Sarah
hehehe, thanks...i know its not something i write...but, even in this, ther was a subtle hint of me, the missing moonlight? who would that be? :)
n dont you worry abt the mushy mushy dreams...yousure would have it tonight... :P
Oww!....This poem is so romantic....I loved the way it started and ended....
The presence of moonlight is not so important as long as you have those feelings...
Lovely!
Keep writing Eon!..:D
@Valli
Well, true as long as they are with you, moonlight, no moonlight doesnt really matter...but then, wen they arent arnd, wat do you do sittting in the moonlight??
:)
I am dreaming..Beautiful write-up
@Alcina
dreams are nice, but they dont last.. :(
thanks..
:)
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