For Japan n its People...
Posted in destruction, Japan, pain, peace, suffering 28 comments
we humans salviate,
never really care
whats right or wrong...
ignorant in our hunger,
we forget
what goes away, comes along...
life comes crawling down,
the wounds never heal
n the numb never gone...
it seeps through our soul,
innocent hearts, if not god
death have mercy upon...
p.s. - what really inspired me to write this one is a video by "Dream Theatre"
the music is so perfect...it so beautifully describes pain suffering, the silence that follows after the destrcution...
If music were words,
this is the best speech i have heard...
never really care
whats right or wrong...
ignorant in our hunger,
we forget
what goes away, comes along...
life comes crawling down,
the wounds never heal
n the numb never gone...
it seeps through our soul,
innocent hearts, if not god
death have mercy upon...
p.s. - what really inspired me to write this one is a video by "Dream Theatre"
the music is so perfect...it so beautifully describes pain suffering, the silence that follows after the destrcution...
If music were words,
this is the best speech i have heard...
28 comments:
sorry cant write a lot abt the poem....coz the topic itself brings back tormntin memories 4 me....just prayin god help the surviors...n their miseries end soon...btw the way u phrased this piece is awesome...:)
@Vaisakhi
Hope they survive the ordeal...
Miseries comes to them whom god knows can make through it. Japan did it once and will make it yet again. This time whole world is with them. This ordeal will pass too. Amen!
@Deepika
nicely said. Amen.
n thank you.. ;)
well written :)
Prayers go out to Japan..God give them strength to recover!!
The only problem is that a few, who had not forgot that everything comes around, they too had to suffer. Nature cannot exercise discretion when it lands its blow.
Nicely done, and yes, the instrumental is soothing.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Nicely expressed ..
May Japan recover soon..
as for the video u aptly described it 'if words were much , this the best speech i've ever heard!
personally what pains me much is the broken relations and sufferings of those survivors. May God Almighty give them strength to endure the loss.
sarah
Nicely written...:]
Praying for Japan _/\_
written very well. lets pray to god that all of them get more strength to fyt all the tragedy .
@Dazzling Star
Thank you, n so may be... :)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Nature is too big an entity to observe discretion and that too for mere humans? may be not...
A lesson to be learnt... :)
the music is indeed nice...
@Simran
n so may be it...
@Sarah
music is indeed magic...n may the almighty hear the prayers of the millions...
@Valli
thank you :)
n i pray for you... _/\_ ;)
@some unspoken words
Amen...
Seriously Eon it was something that just can't be put forth in words...just the thought of it sends shivers down my spine, hope all gets well soon..just praying that nature's wrath end soon! Ameen
Take Care.
How can pain and suffering be beautifully expressed?! Its a nice piece that you have written.. Lets pray..
Cheers,
@Fatima
Hope & Prayers are all we have for the moment...
@Tanvi
Thank you...n Amen.
Your words have said it all...lets pray and hope the light will soon come along with happiness
P.S.will reply to your comment on my post soon...have to say a lot about it ;)
@Poonam
Well, pray, we must...
p.s.- well, i was like O_0? for sure wen i read that...will wait to read how u could possibly explain that...
;)
death shows no mercy... I too join you in the prayer that is all I can.
@Beyond
Pray, is all we can do...
beautiful poem
we forget
what goes away, comes along
@sm
Hey, thanks... :)
U do have a way with words. Adding u to the blogroll :)
@The Wandering Minstrel
Well, thanks, and an honour...
:)
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