void...
Posted in despair, love, pain, silhouette, void 7 comments
is it just your face,
or is it you,
that remains a mystery
deep inside me,
intriguing my being...
staring at strange eyes
a fate, bestowed upon me
and forced to wonder
would you even say,
“its ME..”
failing to contain,
my heart in despair..
longing for you
every moment,
but darkness, stares…
7 comments:
Great pain... and longing... i liked the flow of it from the first stanza down to the last... great reads!!!:)
Have a blessed day!!!:)
>kelvin
@ Kelvin
Hey Buddy,
thanx for dropping by...and thanx for liking it too...
@ Tripat'Prerna'
Hey,that link, the ghazal is nice...infact, the words are jus excellent...liked it..
thanx for sharing it...
Provoking intense pain in minimal words... Thats a skill man..... I simply loved it... Keep it up dear !
@ I Am Alive...
Hey,
after a long tym...good to see u back..Thanx for your comments...
Pain is one thing god bestowed in abundance to me... :)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
This was awesome piece :)
I loved it could relate to it as i am going through the same :)
@Tanvi
Hey, welcome n thanx for your comments...it was written to express a state of mind...or rather to take out the pain...
keep visiting..
;)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
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