Chaos...
Posted in confused, illusion, pain, silhouette 6 comments
Looking through
the veil
into the emptiness..
Losing my being,
floating around
your memories…
Living each day
in my illusion,
of you walking
by my side…
The night seeps
through, like venom
in my veins, and
I long for distance,
from what’s sane…
Here i have tried to put in the state of mind i have been going through for the past many a weeks....My mind is just confused, actually its me who is confused..like always, wanted to take it out...wanted to express it what was haunting me...
the veil
into the emptiness..
Losing my being,
floating around
your memories…
Living each day
in my illusion,
of you walking
by my side…
The night seeps
through, like venom
in my veins, and
I long for distance,
from what’s sane…
Here i have tried to put in the state of mind i have been going through for the past many a weeks....My mind is just confused, actually its me who is confused..like always, wanted to take it out...wanted to express it what was haunting me...
6 comments:
I can imagine what u r going through, coz I myself have gone through this state...Sometimes being in a state of illusion is preferable to facing reality.. Just want to hold on to the wisp of smoke and never let it go..
I wish I could put my state of my mind so efectively :)
@Nikki,
Hey long tym...well thanx for the appreciation...it is a difficult phase to go through...
Keep writing, your style of writing has a freshness to it... :)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
'Confusion' is the biggest expression we all go through.. Atleast I do... I am confused all the time..
Good job done dear... I don't know if I can verbalize myself so well into poem like this...
@ I Am Alive
Hey thanx a lot...well, i describe confusion as a state of mind when we know what is right but still wanting to cling to what the heart says...at times being confused is good, atleast we are thinking...hehe :)
good to see you...you havent posted anything of late...keep writing.
a refrshin intro to "confusion" or "chaos".....somethin diffrnt....but somethin people can easily relate to...was nice to read...:)
@Vaisakhi
Well, thanks...this particular post came when my mind couldn't take it any more...What better way than write it out...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
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