Submission...
Posted in love, pain, sacrifice 8 comments
Dry are my eyes,
But cry i did...
For the pain inside,
Is too consuming...
Gathering the sharpnels,
Of your words unsaid...
Piercing my very being,
Nursing the wounds undressed...
Egos unbent, they say,
Sacrifices untold, it is...
Whats in between,
Your eyes in silence, screams...
The present, so surreal,
Yet living the ordeal...
Purpose is not what it seems,
Love, they say, survives by all means...
For most it may seem completely distorted when read in a flow, it seems as if somethings amiss here...true, it is a portrayal of something that has been inside for long...i wouldn’t elaborate much on what the whole thing means, coz then you wouldn’t be able to interpret it in your own way which i believe is the right of every reader....
Well, thanks to all of you, for you are the very reason this particular post is here...
But cry i did...
For the pain inside,
Is too consuming...
Gathering the sharpnels,
Of your words unsaid...
Piercing my very being,
Nursing the wounds undressed...
Egos unbent, they say,
Sacrifices untold, it is...
Whats in between,
Your eyes in silence, screams...
The present, so surreal,
Yet living the ordeal...
Purpose is not what it seems,
Love, they say, survives by all means...
For most it may seem completely distorted when read in a flow, it seems as if somethings amiss here...true, it is a portrayal of something that has been inside for long...i wouldn’t elaborate much on what the whole thing means, coz then you wouldn’t be able to interpret it in your own way which i believe is the right of every reader....
Well, thanks to all of you, for you are the very reason this particular post is here...
8 comments:
Hi there friend,
There is nothing amiss here, as I see it. I see deep emotions. I see a person who is in dire need of someone who can hear him out, who can "understand" and "feel" his pain, and who can say words that can ease the misery. Also, one thing I can see is the egoistic "love", which is not love at all that seems to be so selfish that it has hurt him so much, to the point that tears have dried up and enduring pain has become a habit.
The tale is very grim. I hope this medium has let you put some of it out of your chest, and I hope you feel better after doing it.
Have a nice day.
Hey VP,
thanx for your words...
part of what you say is right, but, to be honest, you saw it the way i expected people to see it...like i put it down, though it may seem egoistic, its actually her sacrifice...
true, i felt a lot better after writing...
thanx again,
regards,
The Silhouette...
wow...so beautifully expressed :)
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Hey Tripat,
Thanx for your lovely words...keep visiting...
Will chk out ur blogs soon..
Regards,
The Silhouette...
I have walked this path before
I have seen such faces that tells me similar stories of love and longings ....
I have seen enough dried tears in umpteen eyes ... and have cried over that too ... good words there ... keep walking !!!
@Anorak
Hey Buddy,
thanx for your words here...and the lines are amazing too...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Beautifully written. I'm a great fan of broken verse, and you're poetry was subtle, and many things unsaid, yet the very same things were screaming through the line. Amazing work.
@Meher
It was a scream, muffled by my cowardice...but it matters the least now...
:)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
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