Incarceration...
Posted in agony, freedom, prisoner 6 comments
Let me fly out in this moment,
Let me fly just one more time...
The sun is at its zenith,
The clouds give a light cover...
Its my wings anyway,
Then why wouldn’t you let me go??
Am i a slave at your peril?
Then why am i in your hold??
The sky is my home,
I sing about my freedom...
Bounded in your clutches,
Its death that you give in pieces...
O please!! do let me fly,
I am a creature of the sky...
Just once let me feel that wind,
And happily, i would let you win....
Let me fly just one more time...
The sun is at its zenith,
The clouds give a light cover...
Its my wings anyway,
Then why wouldn’t you let me go??
Am i a slave at your peril?
Then why am i in your hold??
The sky is my home,
I sing about my freedom...
Bounded in your clutches,
Its death that you give in pieces...
O please!! do let me fly,
I am a creature of the sky...
Just once let me feel that wind,
And happily, i would let you win....
6 comments:
Hi there,
Feelings of a person whose wings seem to be cut. He wants to fly, but he cannot. A person independent in his thoughts and who desires free will, but is bogged down and heavily influenced by the people around. Isn't this the life of many people? I can totally relate to this.
Lovely poem, my friend. Very very real and strong.
Hey VP,
Thanx for unwrappin the lines so beautifully...You really go deep into the subject buddy...
thanx a lot...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
being a manic commitment phobic, I can totally relate to it. perhaps not in the good way as you wrote :)
relationships that mean the world to us can bog us down and bind us with chains we cant stand. sometimes the closeness becomes suffocating ... and we cant to break free...
loved this one :)
@ Chhaya
Being free from commitmants and living at ones' own terms is much better rather than living for someone else...
But sometimes the loneliness can also be too consuming...
like we say, every coin has two sides...
Regards...
Hi Buddy,
Oh, full of wanting... i could say...!!!:)
...and i'm back... officially returnin' back and movin' on today... bein' out for a month is enough for me to say 'enough'... enough from all those distress and wretchedness i had been through... and now, let me thank you for your sincere effort in extending your care, love and support on my blog... it made me feel so blessed... so blessed that i was loved and cared by those people i never thought would give such care and love... thanks buddy... and wow, your blog transformed in a great way... glad to see the new look.... cheers!!!:)
A Blessed Day!!!:D
>kelvin
@Kelvin
Hey buddy...glad to know you are back...missed your posts and comments...Still to read your last post..Will visit soon..
tc..
Regards,
The Silhouette...
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