Posted in absence, love, silhouette 22 comments
open your eyes girl,
isnt it a bit too long
i've been waiting by your bedside
of soft earth and grass
look at the stars so lovely
they beckon you to gaze at them
for even they are waiting
for your eyes to savour them...
the night is spreading its cover,
of smooth dark velvet
over your ivory skin
it cradles u in ur sleep
the sun rises with hope
of not the new day
but it awaits its sunshine
thats lost with your smile...
my pain seems so little
when i look at all of them
they seem so lost
in the gloom of your absence...
-Eon Heath
P.s.- its been really long that i posted something...so just putting up this post that i had written a few months back...
a bit cuaght up with work these days, will be back...soon.. ;-)
n my sincere apologies to all my friends for not catching up with your posts... :(
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22 comments:
I always enjoy reading your poetry! Everything I've read so far has been so beautiful, and something that I could relate to.
its been quite sometime I've visited your blog, and that's a beautiful poem there. God knows I needed to read one.
P. S. I'm an atheist.
But I had to read one.
omg wat should i be sayin....back from ur self imposed site-site exile?!...welcome back...:)...beautiful poem...i spl loved these lines...the night is spreading its cover,
of smooth dark velvet
over your ivory skin
it cradles u in ur sleep....amazin....:)
Um, it is cool to be reading from you. Yes, it's been really long.
The poem, or whatever it is that you'd like to call it synthesizes very peacefully in my head. Like I think I have it in me to process and analyse what substance this has been etched out of. The words, they have their impact, really. : )
Its painful, yet I would say its beautiful. One of my dear friend had mentioned the words 'Beautiful Pain' and I had agreed to it...and here I felt the same.
My brain cells of writing any verse or prose have failed me for time being, so am sharing a pretty verse your words reminded me of:
"Doubt that the stars are fire;
Doubt that the sun doth move;
Doubt truth to be a liar;
But never doubt I love."
By William Shakespeare, from the play 'Hamlet', the verse was written by Hamlet in a letter to his love Ophelia
:)
P.S.I think this was the right time to publish this poem. Yet I feel something is missing, The Crown- Title.
this is beautiful ... very very nice ...
while reading this, reminded me of some shots from the cartoon 'wolf's rain'...
you actually apologised in the end ? so sweeet !
finish off work soon
@Urban Butterfly
thanks.. :) am glad you can relate to them, coz most of it are just momentory surge of emotions...
@Meher
you wudn hav missed much...even i wasnt blogging for quite sometime...
:)
but i would say, its been quite sometime i got to talk to you...
hope to catch up soon...
@Vaisakhi
SElf imposed?? SELF IMPOSED!!!
:P
i wroe it sometime back...didn post it thats all...words hav deserted me for now...i dont knw wen i will be back...
:)
@Kankshita
:)
n its been long since we spoke...
glad you liked it...
@Poonam.doc
shakespear sahi hai....
:P
naby things amiss here...but then my brainy cells are still on leave..
:P
@Unda pakhru
:)
ut oo, finish off your work soom...come online sometime...
Lovely poetry.
Words don't have to rhyme to make their beauty felt or give them a poetic feel... This one is a perfect example..
P.S.: Well, you did make up for your absence with this wonderful post :-)
Love the way you express :)
Beautiful!
@Manshaa
words without a tune sing just as well as the song itself....
:)
thanks .. :P
@Simran
thanks ..
:)
Beautiful work Eon :)
Keep writing :)
@Valli
hey, thanks a lot..
:)
Eon,
You write amazingly well my frnd :)
Went through the whole blog (n reading sm of the stuff again!)
waiting for sm more words :)
Harsh mai late ho gayi :/ But I liked the fairytale you penned.. But I wonder is it really one? its dark....
And I love the poem of shakespeare posted by Poonam from Hamlet :D Perfect :D
Cheers,
@Rahul
Firstly, sorry for replying so late to your kind words...and am glad you could relate to the words...
:)
Regards,
Eon
@Tanvi
fairytales always dont end with "happily ever after" theme..
:)
some are dark...
n well, thanks...late or early doesnt matter, you read thats more than what i ask for..
:)
:P
n yes, keep those giggles ringing...
:D
hehehehehe...
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