Reverie...
Posted in memories, pain, past, silhouette 40 comments
The chain of thoughts,
Often digs up the past…
Reminds me of the days,
Of the deeds and words
That were left halfway…
The nights are filled,
With my shattered dreams…
Revelling in my eyes,
Is the numbness of this pain
Memoirs of the crimson stream…
I shouldn’t have tried
Slaying these monsters
Of the bay…
In their vicious smile,
Is where my happiness lay…
-Eon Heath
p.s.- No nothings for why this post is here...it is long due...an acceptence to myself.
:)
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40 comments:
Better to accept the real you, and live with it, and move on to brighter things. Well written. :)
@Meher
well trying to...
Thanks gal..
:)
to move on to brightr side of life awaitin u is the best way to live...chains of past dont abandon u but in due time they loosen enough to elope from them...nice write...
@Vaisakhi
wat if its me who holds on to those chains that have already broken??
:)
thanks..
In their vicious smile,
Is where my happiness lay…
This line grabs my heart like anything..
*Lays me in a stream of light and darkness* :)
Just one question...why crimson stream?
There is pain, and I don't understand why you'd want to be it the real you when you could be more.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Blasphemous Aesthete
The answer to it, i dont know...but then, may be i know and am yet to accept it...
:)
thanks buddy.
@Alcina
why crimson...hmmm, crimson is a shade of?
:)
You just can't let go of the past coz it has a strong hold over you and somewhere it is a medium for molding you into what you are today....but its equally better to let things be as they are isn't it ??
Good read liked it :)
Take Care.
@Fatima
yes the past is better left undisturbed...
:)
thanks...
The chain of thoughts,
Often digs up the past…
very true...
Good poem :)
And loved your new template <3
@Valli
Thanks gal...
:)
In the midst of shattered dreams and the numbness of pain, there seems to be pleasant reverie from the revelling.
Hmm...there is always something in nothing :)
kuch nahi mein bhi kuch hota hai :P
@Poonam.doc
its everything or nothing...
;-)
oh boss
memories only hurt ... and till you can let them merge with you, thye will distrueb you
@Deepa
Memories hurt if we let them...if those moments could make us laugh then, why should we let them hurt us now?? why not remember them for the happy times they brought??
Accepting them is a better choice i feel...
:)
thought is a product of the past.. the lifeless past.. the dead past
Ouch!
memories hurt only when you sit on the pointy end of it.
so dont sit..keep walking!!
good for health you see
Nice lines buddy...
Honest lines
@Deepa
merge!!aha!!
hmmm?
errrr..
@Inferno
Memories are reminders of the dead past....
yes the past is dead...but not those moments...
they live...its upto us to keep them alive...if we wish to..
thanks..
@Sorcy
True, they hurt when we think abt them...but then, is there an option of not thinking?
priority, yes, not to proiritize them, butthen, what if the person in those memories was your only priority?
thanks buddy...
:)
aliyaa, pavam undapakhruye kalli aakalye...
memories are an integral part of our life, keep them with you but not so much that they interfere with the bright future you have:)
cheers!
p.s- my blog is by the same name- Reverie..:P
@Tarunima
is it? nice...coincidence?
well, true, memories are an integral part of life...sometimes they do interfere...
:)
What exactly is memorizing? It is the act of bringing something into the present. Yes, the Present. Because that is where life is. What gives this present its life? That is where I am (and you are). That is where light is. Whatever is with me shares my 'liveness'.
@Inferno
Thoughtful what you said...i dont want to comment on it...just want to let it sink in...and then i will say how i see it...
quite thoughtful.
Thanks.
I dont like remembering any of my experiences / happenings ... if they were good, they only make me feel bad that the moment / person is gone ... and at times, make me wish for those happy moments again ..
and if the memories are bad, they just make me tense ... so either way, i hate memories (remmeber the 'I hate tears' dialogue?? To be said in the same tone)
Sorcy .. eh ? what ?
Thanks boss ... this Sorcy .. he has taken it up with a a vengeance .. and is after me !!
Inferno, I am unable to view your blog ..
@Undapakhru
da, is there really a choice of remembering or not?
i prefer accepting them for how it was... :) good or bad, they are to stay i guess...
and abt our dear sorcy...well...
he is up against many...may be he feels cornered??
*he he he*
ya ya .... could be ,,.. poor darling .. he must be lost :D :D :D
i alwasy feel u should be allowed to have selective hypnosis to take away your bad memories
@Undapakhru
i dont see them as good or bad...they are just a past...and, i treasure them gal...
:)
:(
i find it hard to move on with life if i have memories .. so generally, i dont have photos either
@Undapakhru
like they say...everyone has their own cross to carry...
:)
sent ...
Wow!
You living my life Eon?!
soothing lines. liked ur template. well happiness lies in the way we accept things. :)
@MTI
hehehe, i live many a lives....
:)
some seem similar...
@Some Unspoken Words
true, happiness lies in acceptance..
:)
thanks..
:D
very nice and touching.....
@AS
Thank you...n welcome...
:)
I shouldn’t have tried
Slaying these monsters
Of the bay…
In their vicious smile,
Is where my happiness lay…
Loved these lines
@Ivre
glad you liked them....
:)
thanks..
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