Obscure...
Posted in confused, lost, pain, silhouette, time, transition 31 comments
Why am I so confused
with what I think
I refuse to believe
In those sweet nothings…
I walk looking for
Empty streets…
Often ending up
At the place we meet…
Am still to forget
The ways of your smile
And I cant give up
Treating myself unkind…
The look of your eyes
Tell me you are still mine
And its just not wise
To let someone reside…
This transition of my life
Is something
I cant stand this time…
Wake me up
Or let me sleep
I wanna get better
than just memories……
I say, should I give up
Or should I fight
Keep on dreaming
Of you each night…
- Eon Heath
i cant really say what provoked me to write this...it had something to do with a conversation with a fellow blogger and a little bit of the draught going on..
;-)
jokes apart, there are moments that question the foundation of your belief, your faith...tried to capture on such moment for me...
img courtesy - Google
31 comments:
Am I sensing a little bit of despair?
In my view, I see this flow starting with despair, at least. Then trying to make sense of what is not. Consoling yourself to believe in that nothing, hoping that there is hope. Then at the end, there is determination to get over it, but then that too is marred by the things of the past, glorious past if you will, that are no more today - bringing you back into reality and shattering the determination.
I don't know what I can say, but I see that it was all natural.
-Vittal
@Vittal
And i said to myself, is it really true??!! is it him??
i say, blogosphere missed "The Legend"...welcome home...
:)
you always had this way of getting to feel the heart that poured those words..amazing...the way you read it..
thanks a tonne buddy...made my day!!
Regards,
Eon
p.s.- It woudl be an honour to see your words flowing again..
;-)
Eon,
And once again.....
Brings to mind the lyrics...
"Strumming my pain with his fingers. Singing my life with his words."
*sigh*
sadness n confusion...this is not the usual u...m despair n hope walkin togethr in a dark misty path...
very natural write...lovely lines...but i really want u to be happy n chirpy...:)
And its just not wise
To let someone reside…
True, but sometimes, it is an error to chase fools gold when diamonds are lying there in the rough for you to choose for a lifetime.
Cheers
Blasphemous Aesthete
The life that was,that is and that will be..as always shall be linked as is linked..but the only thing you can strive on when the life that was is not anymore is just memory!
to fight or not to fight?It's the way you choose for them..sometimes the haze that covers up the mind,heart and soul is too much to clear up..so we need a break from life..and then everything again will be good to see..
well... nice one indeed. many a times , appreciation understates the beauty of things. So , it does here too. this is a piece of poetry not bounded by any rhyme or rythm but has an inherent flow!
Yo boss !
Where have you been ??
You know my views on this ... so no comments !!
And i know the fellow blogger too !!! :D :D :D
How have you been ?
@MTI
the sigh says that its not that pleasant a memmory...the lyrics reminds of something?
:)
tc...
@Vaisakhi
:) m happy chirpy...(chirpy?? really?!!)
its just the moment that brings out something like this ^
thanks...
:D
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Well, true what you say buddy...but when is the question...when is it not too early, and would it be not too late??
:)
@Alcina
And one such state it was when these lines were created..
:)
@Shadhaj
Well, that was the style i wanted to capture in this, coz a regular flow wouldnt have the effect of obscurity...
:)
thanks a lot...your words make me feel like am on alps..
;-)
@Undapakhru
:D how wouldnt you knw the fellow blogger?? :P
and yes, i very much know your views on it.. :)
thanks...
weekend...was *fermented* as usual... :)
very well written, so beautifully and tenderly expressed! your poem really touched me, because I'm feeling something similar. thank you for sharing!
Your poetry is beautiful!!
@Camille
Its always when we feel it that the words seem real..
:)
its how you relate to it that shows you the beauty of any verse...
glad you could relate to this...
n yes, Welcome..
:) This Smile will say what I want to...
Decipher it :P
@Poonam.doc
process started
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- dumbhead :P
Confusion is a strange word, beautifully describes the one within us vacillating between the past and the present. So fascinating is this state that sometimes we make it a way of life :)
Macha me is back.
Once again beautiful lines.
ya know..times like this is when you really need a cup of hot coffee and monsoon.
@Manshaa
well, its best if we donot make it a way of life...
like every thing, even this may get addictive...
(n i happen to have too much on teh list.. :P)
@Sorcy
vanakam aliyaa....
coffee?? aliyaa, endu pati? kaafi'yo? vallom addikyan kathirikkune team aallye?
Eon,
Faith and its offspring, hope are scarcely accepted but involuntarily practiced by all. You need something to believe in, given life is too mushy and nauseating to carry forward alone, almost arduous.
Mass problem, I tell you. Inflicted instant-something on me whilst I was watching a particular episode of an American drama titled Glee!
I could comprehend your vignette and also the note you left, nice.
Insightful read! :)
Eon...I could relate myself with this poem...gr8 description of confused mind....This way or that way....Oh God!!...Even the heads or tails doesn't help....
coz after the result we think about the left out choice lol..:D
Only clarity can help us to make a decision...:D
@Devil May Care
hmm, true wat you say...a mass problem..i tend to manage just fine..
:)
thanks...
@Valli
thats the whole stuff actually....the point in life when u know that choosing any of the option is gonna make you regret not choosing the other one...
thanks...
Sometimes its better to bask in the confusion rather than search for the clarity, as at times even light is hazy and dark clear!
And when the moment passes, it does pass away... the smile will surely find its way :)
Take Care.
utterly stunning
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