Saaki...
Posted in Hindi, memories, night, silhouette 59 comments
Woh shaam phir yaad aayi…
Teri zulfon mein ghul gaya tha yun,
Ke raat ki chadar odh li ho jaise…
Teri saanso ko pee gaya yun,
Ki apne hone ka ehsaas kho gaya jaise…
Teri aankhon mein doob gaya yun,
Ki har lamhaa tham gaya jaise…
Phir na jaane kyun, yaadein,
is sham ki tanhayi mein aa samayi…
beete dino mein behte,
who kuch palon ko saath layi…
shayad is jam ke paymane ne,
teri rooh ko hai sang layi…
phir saaki ne pila di,
aur woh shaam phir yaad aayi….
- Eon Heath
p.s.- Today a certain incident made me think about memories...memories of those days gone by...i donno, just wish Mallya would take over this place soon...
:D
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59 comments:
Wow!
It's so musical and beautiful!
Keep writing in hindi too..you write so well :)
Beautiful...Let the words inside you flow elegantly through your pen...
"Distant memories,
Seems so near,
When we remember...
as the breeze brings message from the past from long mile,
and the memories gone by,
Never says Good Bye
We relive them,
Sometimes with tears,
but always with a Smile... :)
P.S.He already has his vast place, don't let him to expand it...he may land here anytime then :P
'saaki ne bhi kya jaam pilaya
mit gai kuch pal ke liye ye tanhai' :)
beautiful work! I too ws reminded 0f certain days...when i used to be in harmony with myself..alone in those silent, dark nights!
Sarah
ee saaki tere jam ne...bhigo diya mujhe kin yaadon ki barish mein...
khub bhalo....lovely lines...its so good to read ur work after so many days...:)
Wow!...super...you can write lyrics for songs...:D
@Simran
hey...thanks...am glad you liked it...since you write in hindi often..and that too, so well, its a real compliment...
:)
@Poonam.doc
helloo... :P
hmmm, the verses are beautifulll.... :)
and hmm, as long as Mallya's distant relatives are here, i guess the words wud keep flowing...
;-)
iss shaam ke peher mein hi haseen lamhe banke kyun tham jate hain,
uss ajnabi se jaan bane kaise yaad aate hain,
akele hokar bhi na rehne dete hain woh tanha,
apni yaado mein ghuli baatein le aate hain hawa sang,
madhoshi ki leher mein jaam mein doobkar,
unhe woh trishna saaki ehsaas ho aati hai,
raat ke uss sanate mein fir woh shaam apne rang jhalka jati hai..
The image accompanied is just simply awesome..I am in love with the piece and the image..
Subtly Mesmerizing..!!
@Sarah
gald those words could stir ur memories...
:)
thanks..
@Vaisakhi
and its good to see you back on teh blogging scene..
:)
thanks...
@Valli
hehehe, will surely try...
:)
@Alcina
Jo kehna tha, un kuch alfaazo mein keh diya...
:)
thanks...
Was here yesterday but somehow could not find the comment box.
Well, it reminds me of a song by Lucky Ali,
ye tanhaayi, aankhein bhar aayi,
par tu to na aayi
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Hey, you weave magic with words.
This one's beautiful! Whoever inspired you, must be a very beautiful person- in word and deed!
@Blasphemous Aesthete
well, yes the comment box was indeed playing hide n seek.... :)
well, that is a compliment (provided you like Lucky Ali)...thanks buddy....
;-)
@Manshaa
Hey thanks...well, that person is indeed beautiful...
:)
@Catgirl
well, lets see...
:)
agar na hota ye yaadein.. kaise jeeta koi yahan..
bas yaadein hi reh jayengi.. na main, na tum, na woh..
chaa gya babu! :D
absolutely beautiful... :)
@Deepika
Hey momo...thank u thank u... :D
yaadein hi reh jaati hai..
:)
kooooooooi ...
beautiful !! but personally, i prefer not to have memories ...
I get my hindi grammar all wrong .. not too sure where to add ka ke ki !
@Deepa
sometimes i wish i had the option of not having them, but then sometimes i live in them...
hmm, hindi trouble?? chalta hai..Mumbaites dont really care abt grammar.. :)
n welcome..
p.s.- still in the sparrow mode?? "koooi"??
:D :D :D
aargghh .. memories always make me miserable ....
oh the kooi is how we communicate b/w friends !
and w.r.t ur comment on my blog ... Avar Sorcyde maatram .. Sorcy avarude maatram !!
@Deepa
they used to make me miserable too..(still do at times) but then i found it better to come to terms with them..
:)
a part of life.
ohh, nyaan vicharichhu idu vere killi manassil unndo ne....
:D
am obsessed with sparrows .. i think , dream , see and imagine sparrows !!!
neenge wait panni paakungo .. avar nimmunuve hidithare :D :D
@Deepa
"undakilli" = you :D
parvailla.. aagae aennu aglikeilla...
:P
wait and watch .. .just you wait and watch ,... !!
Undakilli .. me ?? no way !!!
@Undakilli
me imagineth, thou expression.
:D
imagine imagine .... oru stalker chase cheyumbol njannum imagine cheyyam !!
Avaru ondu post barudhru .. oru penn stalkerne kurichu !!!!!!
@undakilli
enne aarum stalk cheyaan verat illya...
:)
vannal philosophy de overdose kodutte odikkum..
:D
ninakku avasaram kittune tonunnilya...hehehe
undakilline villichyal prashanam illyalo??
soi officil ithaanalle pani !
very bad very bad !!
have a great day at work !
Lajawab! :)..I've always believed there's a kind of magic in the urdu and hindi poetries and this one is an example of that! :)
Keep writing :)
@undakilli
officil vere chaiyaan onnu illya...
:(
jus office ethite ullu...
:)
u too have a nice day at work (though half the day is already gone.. :) )
@Amar
Hindi / Urdu being our everyday spoken words, our vocabulary is much greater in these languages...whereas english is used to the minimal requirement.
but i do agree to your thoughts...
thanks..
:)
yaa yaaa .... ariyaatha pennungallum boys inde koode chickenne petti samsaarichondirunaal time wwill just fly fly fly fly away .. btw, hens/chicken dont fly right ?
@Undakilli
pinne, ningalle pole sahodarangal kitiyaal time flutter flutter cheyidu povum...
:D
hens and chicken dont fly once roasted...*khi khi khi*
(they cant fly more than a few feet high for a short duration that too.)
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawd !! U r taking on Sorcy's characteristic .. khi khi khi pollum !!!!!!
@Undakilli
da, great minds think like...
:D
you mean " like minds run in a gutter " (yours and Sorc's)
@Undakilli
sure thing....tum aasmaan mein udne waale kya jaano ki naale ki zindagi kya cheez hai...
the undakilli is all chirrpinggg humour!!
:P
naale means ????
@Undapakhru
naale means gutter's big b. a BIIIG gutter.
subhanallah. appki shayari me na jaane kya baat hai, dhun ke bina hi ghazal ban gayi hai. beautiful
@Wandering Minstrel
Ji padne waalon ki nazakat hai...humara kya hai, saaki bahati hai, hum behte hain...
:)
oh langane ... too many languages floating around !
@undapakhru
da, naala means bigg gutter in hindi...
:)
no too many languages da...hindi post = hindi ok...
;-)
ayyo mere baap ... for a minute i forgot abt hindi .. the joy of being able to communicate in kannada !!
Gosh .. Goat's baby is called a kid .. :D :D :D :D did u see sorcy's comment section ? i just hope no2 else is subscribed to it
@Deepa
i read it!!!
n the corrupt haf of my brain was visualising our sorcy thrusting into goats!!!!
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
did you stop at that ???
i laughed lik crazy when i read 'avarudde' comment .. avarde perum kid dy ennu !! Gaaaaaaaaaaaaawd
@Deepa
am still laughing...and you know wats the worst part?? my boss and Sheikhy are sitting opposite to me...i cant even laugh out loud....
:D
and, haan, di ninde imagination ennekatu corrupt aanallyo!!!
i only imagined the thrusts..*he he he* u even came up with the kiddy!!
HAHAHAAHHAHA
ROFL!!!
she served it to me on a platter .. i just hope poor Sorcy understands what i meant too !!
@Undapakhru
good morning da...
"aval" inniyum kure avasarangal platterill serve cheyyum...
;-)
heee heee heee .. i am waiting !!
hey ..
am free now .. finally !!!
i was surprised when i saw ur profile and a new blog .. it wasnt there yesterdy'
@Undapakhru
free now as in?? were u bound to / with something??
:P
*he he he*
hey boss ....
take care of your feet
@Undapakhru
:)
sure re..but the thing is, work overload..so shuttling between site and office for the past 48hrs...
thanks da..
:)
A first timer to your blog.Nice poem...loved some of the lines..!You write well!
@Lilangel
Welcome :)
i hope my lines would make you visit again...
Thanks..
:)
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