Ehsaas
Posted in acceptence, Hindi, love, pain, silhouette 22 comments
Dil ki banjar zameen thi,
Yaadon ka gulistan liye baitha tha…
Tum aaoge iski umeed tho nahi thi magar,
Ek jhalak ki aas liye baitha tha…
Guzra jo manzar tha pyaar ka,
Kisi toofan ki tarah chala gaya…
Ojhal kiya nazron se usse,
Jo dil ko sabse pyaara tha…
Jannat ko bhi thukra du rabba,
Tu pathjad mein jo usko basa de agar…
Muskura kar jahan chod du,
Janaze ko woh dekhne aaye agar…
Rishtey toh sabhi paraye hue,
Ishq mein itna madhosh jo raha…
Saaye ne bhi saath na diya,
Is mein uska bhi toh koi dosh na tha…
Aaj phir dhadkano ko mehsoos hua,
Teri aahat mere abroo ko choo gayi…
Tu tassavur hai mere khayalon ki,
Lo aaj phir mujhe tanha chod gayi…
Khamosh si teri palkon par,
Kuch jazbaat ubhar kar reh gayi...
Khata teri bhi nahi shayad,
Shama jalne se pehle hi jo dhal gayi...
My sincere apologies to all my readers who dont understand "Hindi", but i do promise to come up with something else soon. Recent times have been a bit hectic, so didnt get to concentrate on my blog. And i do remember of my promise to a couple of my readers to come up with a "Happy Happy" post, am trying, will surely write something before Valentines...
:)
The Silhouette...
Yaadon ka gulistan liye baitha tha…
Tum aaoge iski umeed tho nahi thi magar,
Ek jhalak ki aas liye baitha tha…
Guzra jo manzar tha pyaar ka,
Kisi toofan ki tarah chala gaya…
Ojhal kiya nazron se usse,
Jo dil ko sabse pyaara tha…
Jannat ko bhi thukra du rabba,
Tu pathjad mein jo usko basa de agar…
Muskura kar jahan chod du,
Janaze ko woh dekhne aaye agar…
Rishtey toh sabhi paraye hue,
Ishq mein itna madhosh jo raha…
Saaye ne bhi saath na diya,
Is mein uska bhi toh koi dosh na tha…
Aaj phir dhadkano ko mehsoos hua,
Teri aahat mere abroo ko choo gayi…
Tu tassavur hai mere khayalon ki,
Lo aaj phir mujhe tanha chod gayi…
Khamosh si teri palkon par,
Kuch jazbaat ubhar kar reh gayi...
Khata teri bhi nahi shayad,
Shama jalne se pehle hi jo dhal gayi...
My sincere apologies to all my readers who dont understand "Hindi", but i do promise to come up with something else soon. Recent times have been a bit hectic, so didnt get to concentrate on my blog. And i do remember of my promise to a couple of my readers to come up with a "Happy Happy" post, am trying, will surely write something before Valentines...
:)
The Silhouette...
22 comments:
Hmm...that was again a bit sad...though I did sense some spark of hope at the start...do keep that alive... Despite being painful you come out with heart touching words...and somehow the reader to experience it
And waiting for your happy post...
:)
Koi tum se pooche kaun hoon main,
tum keh dena koi khaas nahi,
Ek dost hai acha acha sa,
ek jhooth hai thoda sacha sa,
jo pass ho ke bhi pass nahi,
par usse chupa koi raaz nahi,
Koi tum se pooche kaun hoon main,
tum keh dena koi khaas nahi..
Your poetry reminded me of the above one, some said this for me and i remember every word yet. Thanks :)
btw you have used some punjabi words like 'rabba' here too. So say sorry to angrezz again :-P bichare hindi-punjabi mein pagal ho jayenge.
@Beyond Horizon
Glad that you liked it. If my words do touch a few hearts, i believe that i was able to convey what i felt...thanks a lot...
:)
Well, i tried for days to write something happy, but after 2 weeks of the page being blank, i let it go for a while...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@Deepika
Those are real beautiful words to be appreciated by...lucky gal...hehe..
And abt the punjabi thing, yeah its more of a khichdi of many languages...there is some urdu too...and at times the hindi is more mumbaiya lingo..the grammar has gone for a toss...hehehe...
:)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
I don't know what to comment on this, khud hi tanhayee mein khoyi hoon..pyaar se pyaar karti hoon lekin ab ussi se darti hoon....
It was a senti post and I liked it...happens with me too I wanna write happy stuff end up writing sad ones only ! btw yeah you've used quite a lingo sab kuch dal diya....
At the end mumbai ki shaan hi hai yeh, mix and match ;)
Take Care,
Fatima
Reminiscence - reluctance.
Heaven - forsaken.
Feeling - drilling.
All mustered, clustered -
into sigleton, an entity, lone.
Aaj phir dhadkano ko mehsoos hua,
Teri aahat mere abroo ko choo gayi…
Tu tassavur hai mere khayalon ki,
Lo aaj phir mujhe tanha chod gayi…
Singling out a particular para of all the words was tough, but these were plain beautiful.
Very nice.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
@Fatima
Well yeah, its difficult to stick to one hindi alone, Mumbaite to the core i guess..hehe..
after a while, the pain doesnt bring a feeling of sadness, but it does drain out the happy feeling for sure...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@Sayak
Hey buddy, thanks a lot...it was an outcome of many things bottled up for too long...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@Blasphemous Aesthete
hey, glad you liked it...that is infact one stanza that i love in particular too...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
"Khamosh si teri palkon par,
Kuch jazbaat ubhar kar reh gayi...
Khata teri bhi nahi shayad,
Shama jalne se pehle hi jo dhal gayi..."
I am a bit weak in hindi but dude, i could feel the lines and the emotions.. it was awesome... and the last para sent waves through me, waah waah waah! :D
P.S: Waiting for the happy post by the way :P
Cheers,
@Tanvi
Hey red riding hood...well thanks, i dont know what much to say, but one thing for sure, will post the "happy happy" one soon enough...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
lucky?.. sigh. ask me :P
btw u still din't said sorry toangrezzzziii ppl :P
wah..wah :)
I m myself in a very shayerana mood these days so ur couplets struck even a better chord..touching and sensitive!
Dil ki banjar zameen thi,
Yaadon ka gulistan liye baitha tha…
Tum aaoge iski umeed tho nahi thi magar,
Ek jhalak ki aas liye baitha tha…
this is the most beautiful :)
sarah
@Deepika
May be it wasnt a pleasant encounter, but have someone saying it is definitely lucky...
n i have apologized to the angrez in my p.s. itself...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@Sarah
yup true that the words sink deeper when you experience it...glad that you liked it..
Regards,
The Silhouette...
@ The Silhouette: Yeah Mumbaities can never keep up with that, at least I can't...and Well even the pain is sweet don't you think so?
Take Care,
Fatima
@Fatima
i started reading novels a bit late in my life. and the first novel that i read happened to be "The Da Vinci Code" by Dan Brown. There happens to be a line in that book which says "Pain is good". i donno why, but, i like that line. that would be an understatement, coz i love that line.
true, pain is sweet, its good...
:)
Regards,
The Silhouette...
In my other blog, i was awarded the most stylish blogger award, and I wish to pass it on to you. There are certain steps you need to follow, so you can check out your award on http://pensez.blogspot.com/ . Do collect it. =)
@Meher
Hey, thank you dear, it an honour...
Regards,
The Silhouette...
Wow!! this is such a nice poetry. I am going to read it again and again.
@Always Happy
Hey happy gal, am happy that you liked it...hehe...
:P
Post a Comment