The Dawning...
Posted in acceptence, love, memories, pain, silhouette 37 comments
The ink has dried,
The words are gone,
Have your memories
Disappeared?
Like the autumn leaves
carried by the wind,
why does everything seem,
so incomplete…
Praying for sun,
when it comes pouring down,
why has this rain,
become so tormenting…
Tears of pain
has dried in my eyes,
yet I smile,
knowing nothing will change…
As the time flies
out of my life,
I walk, leaving behind
What was once mine…
-Eon Heath
Image - Flickr
37 comments:
the pain is urs...yes....but so r her memories...n they r happy ones....she'd want u to be happy always...n not be a slave of melancholy...:)...btw....beautiful poem...:)
The song of a broken heart, melancholic, melodic.
Nice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
The first paragraph is stunning, nice poem...
great line.......
As the time flies
out of my life,
I walk, leaving behind
What was once mine…
is'nt this the virtue of life...
That is what everyone does ... "Moving on "
though we all are on our own and because of this precise fact we will never be alone ...
walk alone but never walk away !
'wen u r down to nothing, God is upto something' :)
sarah
I can say one thing. The image you have chosen and the words that you have penned complement each other.
I was reading the lines and looking at the image as the entire picture rose to life and talked to me.
The third and fourth paragraphs sort of held the fort between swaying thoughts. Is that a touch you intended? I am sure it was. :-)
Good work mate!
-Vittal
P.S.: Though I can fairly understand the subtlety, I couldn't quite fathom the reference of autumn leaves carried by the wind to the incompleteness. May be I am losing my touch! Yikes!
The dawning...a new beginning, thats what I can read in your writings...both here and in hindi too.
How long will there be the emptiness/incompleteness? Spring may arrive soon.
Acceptance can be seen by the smile, let it be from heart.
I can see the presence of (her) The Silhouette :)
eloquently penned! sad and soulful all at once..
'Tears of pain
has dried in my eyes,
yet I smile,
knowing nothing will change…'
Pain...acceptance.. Wonder how it felt putting this poem pen to paper...
Nice, beautiful verses!
@Vaisakhi
Melancholy is like the blue moon...happens at times, and egulfs you in itself...
:)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
Most often than not, its the song of the broken heart that sounds more melodious...
:)
@Saru
:)
glad you liked it...i rather thought you would like the last stanza more..
@Narinder
Thanks...
@Ritika
well, liek i said, one of the best lines i have heard...
:)
thanks...
@Sarah
well, god being upto something is ok...if u docs are upto something, it would be scary.. :P
hehehe...
thanks..
@Vittal
When i saw the pic, i knew it would be perfect...
as for the last two stanzas, after writing the first three, i realised it may end up being a real long one, so i cut it short with those.. :)
the autumn leaves...hmm, well its not you losing your touch, i was asked the same question by one more friend. I wanted to portray the emptiness of the autumn tree once the leaves are all carried away by the cold winds, and the inevitable winter that follows...the tree was the subject, which sadly was no where in teh picture.. O_0?
and once again...thanks a lot.. :)
@Poonam.doc
hmm, spring...i hope i dont start jumping around.. :P
The Silhouette is what remains... :)
@Mehak
:) welcome...long time. (ok,guilty as charged, i knw i have been missing too..will be back, promise...)
n thanks...
@Manshaa
penning these words...well now all thats left of it is a numb...
:)
I won't say much..partly due to the fact that I can't find words..but somehow I'm humming the song Broken..
"The broken clock is a comfort,
It helps me sleep tonight..
Maybe it can stop tomorrow..
From stealing all my time.."
I dunno it maybe sounding weird but thats the way it si!
TC
kooooiiii
' I R back '
if i've told you once, i've told u a 100 times .... do not .. do not .. do not bring up memories
:D :D
was trying to rag u .. dats all
did u click the snap ?? it is lovely .. if u did click it, u r a geniassssss
i liked ur previous post a lot ... romancing sand ??? ahha .. and how ?
hey
thanks to poonam..i discovered your blog:):)
the memories can never disappear because it's imprinted on heart..:):)
well i smile too even though I knew nothing will change
nice one:):)
Its almost a melody, a tune of its own :)
Nice work :)
Aah, commences thoughts in a realist's head, this. Pleasing thing, when you know nothing changes, after all. :)
Dun you like the rain, though?
Very Sad :'(
But Beautiful work !
@Fatima
that in itself is a compliment.. :)
thanks...
@Undapakhru
da...i didnt click the snap, but how is this? "i lent out my cam to someone i donno to click it n post it somewhr so that i could google it.."
:D
thanks da.. :)
n for the previous post... hehehe, didnt get any arab babes to romance...n well, i have left the camels for our sorcy... ;-)
@The other side of me
well, did poonam.doc say anything abt me? she generally says m lazy n a dumbwit...was it the reason u came visiting??
:O
ok...well both of them are true..so anyways, memories often become so distant that it blurs out images...u think of it so often that u forget wats real...
:)
@Seredipity
the heart often sings to the tune of melancholy...
:)
@Kankshita
thr are times you dont like anything...even rains burn your skin...
:)
@Valli
:)
hey, thanks...
you have a beautiful way with words! thanks for sharing. :)
@Urban Butterfly
well, am honoured if you feel so..
thanks... :)
Hiyyaa
As usual...perfect lines
Amazingg.. i loved evry word..:)
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