Shattered....
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Expectations, Realizations. Rejection.
What was i hoping,
What was i planning,
why couldnt i see it coming?
Its agonizing,
Tormenting...
Expectations, Realizations. Rejection.
The anger rising,
its tantalizing,
Forcing me into breaking
am choking
dying inside...
Expectations, Realizations. Rejection.
am still living...
-Eon Heath
p.s. nothing. am fine. its just a writng.
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17 comments:
'Nothing' sometimes says a lot of things.. :)
Probably it is exactly when you wish someone would understand without u having to say anything...and make you hopeful again... A stream of negative emotions, and at the end there's a sigh (of despair)...
That's how I interpret this piece of writing.
Nothing can ever be nothing, coz when you write you just can't write anything...so somewhere that feeling lingers sometimes its plain in view and at other times its hidden waiting to be implored!
Hope what ever is that drove you to pen down these verses calm and the passes with time...I really wish that the light truly shines again and I have an undying hope that it will surely one day sooner or later that depends on you :)
Take Care.
and live we would .. though half broken !
discover the beauty of hope...
'nothing. am fine. its just a writng'.......hmm really???
turst on hope n ride on the awaitin path of faith...expctatns is tormentin true...rejection drives us crazy true...but we still have to go on...n this too is true..all we need here is hope help n trust...n everythin can work out...:)
p.s.hope u r really ok...:)
I started walking on this path, there are no guidelines, I learn as I keep moving ahead.
I did not realize when the darkness engulfed me, even if i close my eyes I can't escape from it.I feared the shadows too, but shadows can be seen only if there is a source of light.
Expectations do hurt, but we cannot keep saying Life isn't fair.
You haven't lost hope, its seen at the end when you say am still living...not just breathing, right?
Kuch nahi kehake bhi bahot kuch keh diya.
Nothing said everything :)
shards of glass
breaking open our mask
opens forth the raw bleeding wound
Its gonna kill you, if no solace is found
Choke not, Fear not, break not
Hurt you, it will , a lot !
Keep the faith, keep calm
And soon you will experience the soothing balm !
//p.s. nothing. am fine. its just a writng.
The way you wrote this poem...I felt it relates to you....
I can see agony in those words...greatly expressed :)
Beautiful
@I Am Alive
long long time...
:)
things are fine i hope..
:)
@Manshaa
well, there are people who read silence too.. :)
thanks... :D
@Fatima
i move on from a lot of emotions..
:)
everything fades eventually...
@Undapakhru
that was beautiful... :)
honestly...heartfelt.
am live, we do....
:D
@Beyond
we live...hope lives..
:)
hope dies, some still live..
:)
@Vaisakhi
hope lives as long as we keep it alive...we live even without hope at times..
:)
am fine re..i keep walking...
;-)
@Poonam.doc
Everything or Nothing...doesnt that engulf everything in its nothingness?
:)
@Valli
:) felt. penned. discarded.
thanks...
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