Resurrection

Posted in agony, despair, memories, pain, silhouette By Eon Heath 17 comments

Distance too far,
Your voice trails away…
Leaving me no choice,
Just hoping you’ll stay..

Promises unkept,
All along the way,
Resurrect me,
To die another day…

Wrote it back in March '09, these lines were supposed to be completed, but then the one who wished to complete it aint around...i guess some things are just meant to be so...

17 comments:

Deepika said...: though incomplete yet it makes sense.. yet again the pain and inability is what aches ...
something that clicks and leaves a stain.
take care; January 13, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Tanvi said...: Incomplete without the person for whom it is meant to be.. sensitively lovely... :)

Take care; January 14, 2011 at 3:38 AM
Eon Heath said...: @Deepika
Pain is good...its something i am addicted to, keeps me alive, feels closer to her...
the stains are a beautiful reminder of what "was"... its 'Her' everywhere...and always...

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 14, 2011 at 9:24 AM
Eon Heath said...: @Tanvi
The incomplete part is what would have been beautiful...a reminder.

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 14, 2011 at 9:26 AM
Fatima said...: I'm reminded of my own words that I had penned down some time back and I guess I'll quote them only, "The one who completed my incompleteness completely...is no more there to complete me!"

I guess this says all that I wanted to say..its a good one though small...holds a lot of worth.

Take Care; January 15, 2011 at 12:26 AM
Eon Heath said...: @Fatima
Well, thanks...i can feel those lines...

anyways, take care,

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 15, 2011 at 9:16 AM
Meher said...: I do understand how you feel. the lines.. promises unkept is brilliant.; January 15, 2011 at 8:41 PM
Eon Heath said...: @Meher
promises, so many of them...more than unkept, or rather, unfulfilled...
u know behind the scenes gal... :)

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 15, 2011 at 10:10 PM
⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺ said...: Sad and expressive poem...
Happy Blogging!; January 16, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Eon Heath said...: @Valli
Thank u...

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 16, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Deepika said...: I really appreciate the way someone can be committed/dedicated to the 'one'. She is the lucky one even in the heavens. The 'pain' is addictive and the driving force behind all our patience. May your love survives forever. Stays immortal.
Take care; January 17, 2011 at 12:06 AM
Eon Heath said...: @Deepika
Thank you, i would only say that i love her, and she taught me all that is ME, she taught me to write, she taught me to love. The way she loved was something different, it was something you give, purely out of your will, and the beauty of it was finding happiness in their happiness. love reaches its zenith when yo give up on expectations...She taught me this. i love her, and will always do...she resides in me, in my heart, so she cannot die until i do...n am happy to keep her in me...
i dont know what i intend to say, but, thanks...

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 17, 2011 at 12:46 AM
Alexandre FABBRI said...: Nobody needs pain, unless they're sick.; January 18, 2011 at 3:51 AM
Eon Heath said...: @Alexandre FABBRI
Firstly, thank you for your visit. True, what you said, no one needs pain. but, what if that pain is a gift from their beloved?? then that pain is much more than any other happiness that may come which doesnt have her essence in it...

Pain is good...atleast for me..
:)

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 18, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Deepika said...: @alexandre- to understand the enjoyment of pain you need to be through it. And trust me its much better than stupid insecurites...; January 18, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Alexandre FABBRI said...: Pain may be better than stupid insecurities but it is a warning which if ignored will increase and increase until one weakens their resolve and slowly begins to die from it. Dying from this so-called 'love' is something that can be avoided if one determines to employ even a tiny measure of inner discipline if one has found the certainty within, that real and painless love is waiting to enoountered. First, though, one needs to let go of the broken rope before one can move from the sure rock in front.; January 18, 2011 at 1:51 PM
Eon Heath said...: @Alexandre FABBRI
True that if ignored we may die from it, but then, "letting go off the rope for the sure rock" aint love either...you never decide to fall in love, it just happens...i know you must have heard it before, but then, aint it true?? its is good to be practical in life, but then, the heart has its place in life too...
its every persons own perspective in life how he endures the pain and bliss, what he learns from it. like we say, 'to each, his own'

:)

Regards,
The Silhouette...; January 18, 2011 at 5:51 PM