the tears streaming down
my eyes,
are just memories
of your smile...
i cant let go
the days you were mine,
for its all of you
that i'll ever have...
scarred, i am drenched
in this crimson tide,
the pain is only
on the inside...
i wish i could say
am over those days,
but thats where, unhealed,
my heart still lays....
--
Eon Heath
p.s. - no image for this post and no title too....its as incomplete as my thoughts and my dumb head*.... :)
* - this point is added on the kind request of Poonam.doc who happens to have a wonderful blog here.. (psst pssst, she also tops my list of "doctors to be away from" :D)
* - this point is added on the kind request of Poonam.doc who happens to have a wonderful blog here.. (psst pssst, she also tops my list of "doctors to be away from" :D)
aww!! dont know what to say!!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully penned and I love the third paragraph. :)
ReplyDeleteThere are a few things like letting go, but I think some things are too dear to let go.
ReplyDeleteNice read.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Nothing can be erased completely from the heart and soul..and somethings should not be...they will make you cry or bring back the yearn strongly but this is how the life has to go on..
ReplyDeleteThis incompleteness looks like gonna be always incomplete cause life has yet too many pieces to be collected for completing the puzzle.
sometimes things...no matter how they hurt....are not meant to let go...life at times gives us moments tat have so much of happiness in them but also invite tears at the same time...treasure them 4 times wen we are irritated n clueless....n i guess they help us wash out everythin at once...n slowly we revert back to stoic phase and accpt the goods again...SMILE...:)
ReplyDeletenice post btw...:)
They say letting go is easy, but some things are better said than done! Maybe the best way is to avoid them...though it means isolation from your true emotions but guess that's the best way!
ReplyDeleteAnd we only can't let go things that are dearest to us...
nice poem though!
TC
She was looking at something at a distant.At that very moment, she felt a tap on her shoulder.She turned and saw her past.She cried, she smiled looking at the wonderful time she had spend there.It held her hands tightly, wanting her to stay.But she cannot live her past along with her present.'Something' will never tap, coz its 'waiting' for her to loosen the grasp from her past, to turn and walk ahead to hold it.
ReplyDeleteIt depends on her, whether she keeps holding or move on,abiding her past with a smile.
I still will be firm in saying, Somethings in our we cannot perceive through others eyes, coz the others have not lived your that part of life.Just saying without being felt is easy.
You will feel the completeness, the moment you decide.
P.S. I did NOT make any kind request...I had dared you :P
i think the memories of bful past are all the keep us going... sometimes the smile they evoke or the hope to have those moments back someday... don't let go... that makes u rhyme :)
ReplyDeleteEvery Warrior of the Light has felt afraid of going into battle.
ReplyDeleteEvery Warrior of the Light has, at some time in the past, lied or betrayed someone.
Every Warrior of the Light has trodden a path that was not his.
Every Warrior of the Light has suffered for the most trivial of reasons.
Every Warrior of the Light has, at least once, believed he was not a Warrior of the Light.
Every Warrior of the Light has failed in his spiritual duties.
Every Warrior of the Light has said 'yes' when he wanted to say 'no.'
Every Warrior of the Light has hurt someone he loved.
That is why he is a Warrior of the Light, because he has been through all this and yet has never lost hope of being better than he is.
and also
“But there is suffering in life, and there are defeats. No one can avoid them. But it's better to lose some of the battles in the struggles for your dreams than to be defeated without ever knowing what you're fighting for.”
:) Rock on buddy
Ya know..you choreograph words in its awesomeness to form the beautiful mo(ve)ment of words in motion called poetry.
Ps:I cant believe I said that.I meant the lines starting from 'Ya know...'
It must be the climate..it better be the climate.
Warrior of the Light- A Manual
ReplyDelete~Paulo Coelho
......not a fairy tale.
This one's got so much pain... even your words are unable to hide it... every stanza so complete and carries the feeling of pain in it.... so beautifully expressed.... despite the pain!
ReplyDeletelovely words...beautifully crafted lines!
ReplyDelete@Megha Rana
ReplyDelete:)
thanks...not saying too says a lot..
@Saru Singhal
ReplyDelete:)
thank you...i would try to write something in which you would say, "i like the whole thing" ;-)
@Blasphemous Aesthete
ReplyDeleteTrue...so true...
:)
@Alcina
ReplyDeleteLife is complete with its incompleteness...
:)
its always so...
@Vaisakhi
ReplyDelete:)
Times change, n so do phases...
:) <--- The smile you asked for... :P
@Fatima
ReplyDeleteWe cant avoid wat we cant control.. :)
@Poonam.doc
ReplyDeleteOhh so u DARED ME is it?? :P so wat? my blog, i write wat i want... :P
n well, she looks forward to the future, lives the present, n yet, waits for that tap on her shoulder...
:)
@Deepika
ReplyDelete:)
to do or not to do, are to decide? yes, but how? no if not...
@Sorcy
ReplyDeleteAliyaa, i understand u get heated up pretty easily...n with the mercury having a ball....u lose yours... :P
n well, teh warrior of light.. \m/
@MTI
ReplyDeletenot a fairy tale......
:)
@Manshaa
ReplyDeletewords are nothing but silence given a voice to speak...
:)
@Kalyan
ReplyDelete:) thanks...n welcome to this blog..
Umm....beautiful lines.. Letting go is easy or difficult I don't know, but I'll say one, cherish those memories in a corner of your heart forever :) A title or a pic won't compliment such pure and beautiful thoughts :) Nice :)
ReplyDeleteCheers,
Lovely! The last two paras so beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleteOops! I mean, the last two paras ARE so beautiful. :)
ReplyDelete@Tanvi
ReplyDeletetrue, memories are n will always be a part of that person with us...
:)
thanks...
p.s.- sorry for replying late...
@Harsha
ReplyDelete:)
thanks...
i cant recall when was the last time i read this much amazing blog :)
ReplyDelete@Rahul
ReplyDeleteAm humbled. I try my best to give words to emotions...
Thanks for your words...
Regards,
Eon Heath